by ram@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
(Stefan Ram)
Apr 9, 2008 at 12:14 AM
Roedy Green <see_website@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> writes:
>If I can understand what you mean, I'm happy to translate into
>what I consider idiomatic English.
It would be asked too much if I would expect you to translate
everything. But your previous criticism was so general and
wide that I was not able to relate it to any specific wording
or part of my text. So, possibly you could pick one or two
sentences written by me and explain the problem using these
sentences and suggest idiomatic translation.
But I am not sure whether this will have an observable effect
on my future writing, because I assume that I would have to go
through at least several dozen hours of training to change the
style of my writing significantly.
